For Year 10, please post yesterday's 1-hour assignment of summarizing comics, an Asterix and Obelix series, titled "The Legionary", pp. 4-13 into around 200 words.
Grading criteria:
1. Plots
2. Language use: grammar, spelling
3. Originality--hardly any copy of the text in the dialogue boxes
4. Extra images (from google/ website) no more than 2, please,
add a special point.
Deadline: Monday, May 18, 2009.
Wednesday, May 13, 2009
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Happy birthday! Asterix & Obelix buat tugas? wowww... :P
One day, in the bright morning, asterix and obelix went for a hunt. In the way there, they meet Panacea, a pretty girl who’s really kind. Obelix had a crush with her, until he broke many trees in the forest, he even let the romans went away from him. After an easy hunt, they had got 4 boars. They went home after that. In the way home, they met Panacea once again. Obelix acted like a stupid person looking after panacea, before he finally got up. In that day, Obelix only ate 2 boars (which is usually a plenty of it). Asterix realized that something wrong happened with Obelix. He looked to Getafix, to discuss what’s going on. Later, when they were walking outside, they saw that Obelix followed Panacea with dumb face. Finally, they knew that Obelix had a crush with Panacea. Later, Asterix persuade Obelix to attract Panacea’s caution. First, he brought menhir stone for Panacea, but a Asterix told him to take the flowers in the forest, where later Obelix blow up some romans. When they came to Panacea’s home, a message come and tell that Panacea’s husband is going to Africa for some business. Hearing that, Obelix became so upset, but, with faithful decision, they finally went to Africa to save Panacea’s husband.
btw, sir... mau tanya...
gimana caranya masukin gambar???
thx...
Samuel Radja
:D
The LegionaryIn a beautiful quiet morning, two of our friends, Asterix and Obelix went for a boar hunt. On the way going to the forest, they met a pretty girl. Obelix fell in love for the first sight. Unfortunately, he was too concentrated in her and bumped into a tree, where Gestafix was up there cutting mistletoe. After they came back from the boar hunt, once again they met the pretty girl. Obelix was really stunned by the girl until he wouldn’t eat. Asterix called Gestafix to talked about this. Then, they knew that Obelix fell in love with the girl that they had already known, Panacea, the Soporifix’s daughter. Dogmatix, their dog felt jealous. Asterix gave an advice to give her a gift. They decided that flowers were the best gift to be given. Obelix went to find it, and he met the Roman patrol. He cleaned them up by his power and took the flowers. They went to Panacea’s home and had a talk with her. Suddenly, Panacea received a message from Tragicomix, telling that he was forced to join the Legion. Panacea felt sad because Tragicomix and she were engaged. Finally, Asterix and Obelix chose to go to Condatum and try to rescue Tragicomix, even though Obelix felt heartbroken. Then their journey began.
A Few of The Gauls
Asterix and Obelix
summary by: Natasia Yosua
Asterix and Obelix was a couple of very best friends. They always knew each other’s hobbies and characters, included the always-hungry character of Obelix. That was why Asterix directly realized that there was something wrong with his giant buddy when he only ate two boars, well Obelix always ate at least three in his whole life. Obelix also went bumping several trees, lost his consciousness, and sometimes disappeared in a sudden. Asterix was so annoyed with his buddy’s changes, he knew something has gone wrong. So he found out about the big thing which was bothered Obelix’s mind so much.
After interviewed the druid and some villagers, Asterix finally found out that Obelix was falling in love with Panacea, the gorgeous daughter of Soporifix. With the big supports and many useful helps from Asterix, finally Obelix had enough bravery to come and give a bunch of flowers for Panacea. Panacea loved the flowers so much, but unfortunately, a badnews for Panacea, and also Obelix, came. It came from Tragicomix, Panacea’s fiancee, and said that he had to go to Africa and joined the legion. Yes, Panacea had engaged! Obelix was so broken-hearted, but in the name of love, he decided to go and found Tragicomix.
Here are the pictures:
http://www.asterix.co.nz/take_a_look/legionary/panacea.jpg
http://www.doubleclix-blog.com/images/plastoy07.jpg
The Legionary
Asterix was a hero who gets his power from magic potion brewed by the druid Getafix. Obelix was a menhir delivery. Obelix and Asterix was best friend.
At a shiny morning, asterix asked obelix to have a boar hunt. Obelix agree with asterix. They went to the forest for hunting. On the way, they met very beautiful girl. Her name is Panacea. Obelix lost his concentration when he saw that girl. Then, he bumped a tree in a forest.
Later …
Obelix and asterix had a good hunt. They get some boars. But obelix lost his eat appetite. He just ate two boars. Asterix very worried about Obelix and he asked Getafix to saw Obelix. After Getafix saw Obelix, he said that Obelix felt in love and he didn’t have potion for healed Obelix.
Asterix tried to help Obelix. He told Obelix to give Panacea a present. Then, Obelix came to Panacea’s house and gave her a bunch of flower. Panacea got bad news. Tragicomix, Panacea’s fiancé join the Romans legion and he said good bye to Panacea forever. Panacea was very sad.
Obelix was shock when he knows that Panacea had fiancé. But, when Obelix saw Panacea sad, he tried to help her. Obelix went to find and bring Tragicomix back for Panacea.
On a shiny day, Asterix and Obelix went to the jungle where Obelix met Panacea. He was in love with Panacea and he couldn't focus on what he was doing. He crushed some trees. He then went back to his place and Asterix and Obelix ate their lunch. Obelix lost his appetite and he couldn’t eat as many as he could in his usual time. Asterix was a bit worried and he went to Getafix’s place. They would like to go back to Obelix’s place but they found Obelix chasing Panacea in the road. They knew that he was in love with Panacea. Obelix then, would like to meet Panacea and he went to the woods to find a nice flower for her. He went to her place and suddenly, there’s a postman came and bringing a bad news to Panacea. Then Obelix knew that Panacea was engaged with Tragicomix in Cordatum. He was broken-hearted but he told Panacea that he would like to get Tragicomix back to her. Asterix and Obelix went to Africa to find Tragicomix and bring him back to Panacea. Before he left, Obelix asked Panacea to take care of Dogmatix.
Alvin Vimala
X-BC / 01
Obelix were act strangely. He bumped into trees and just ate two boars (usually he ate three). Asterix were confused to Obelix’s strange acts, so he asked O Druid Getafix. Later, they knew that Obelix were fall in love to Panacea, Soporifix’s daughter. Asterix suggested Obelix to give Panacea a little present, like a bunch of flowers, to welcome her home. So, Obelix went into the forest and took a bunch of blue flowers. Then Obelix, Asterix, and dogmatix went to Panacea’s home. As what Asterix though, Panacea liked the flowers. Suddenly, Postaldistrix the postman came and delivered a letter to Panacea. It was a farewell letter from Tragicomix, Panacea’s fiancé. It said that the Romans made Tragicomix join the legion and they were off to Africa. Panacea was very sad, so Obelix decided to go and find Tragicomix for Panacea. In fact, Obelix were so sad, but he wanted to make Panacea happy and proud of him. Then, Asterix and Obelix went to see chief Vitalstatistix. He said that Julius Caesar was in trouble in Africa and they need reinforcement, so they took the officer by force. The chief’s explain made Asterix more steadily to find and bring back Tragicomix. Asterix and Obelix made a quick preparation for their journey, as brought some magic potion. When the time to leave, Panacea thanked them a lot and Obelix asked her to look after dogmatix.
‘Come quick, o druid Getafix! Obelix won’t eat up his boar. He says he doesn’t feel hungry!’ said Asterix just after he entered his wise druid friend’s house. There was something wrong with his dear friend Obelix. He was sighing all the time, and not into anything, including his most desired eating boars. The fact that he ate only two boars really shocked Asterix so he rushed into Getafix’s house. When both of them were on the way to see Obelix, they bumped into him. Obelix was unconsciously following a pretty lady named Panacea, their childhood friend. Obelix was in love! Inexperienced, Obelix was confused about what to do. Asterix suggested giving some flowers.
Soon after he managed to grab them, Obelix, tagged along with Asterix, got to Panacea’s house. ‘Oh, what pretty flowers!’ said Panacea. Those words were killer ones for Obelix. Then she asked them to sit down. It was a perfect chance to leave them alone, but at the time Asterix was about to go, a postman came and brought a message. Tragicomix, Panacea’s fiancé, joined the legion and had to go for Africa. This news really made Panacea sad, at the same time breaking Obelix’s heart. But he didn’t want to see Panacea sad. So he together with Asterix promised her to bring him back. Packed with foods, Getafix’s magic potions, and a broken heart, they were off to go.
Dear Mr. Teguh Santoso
Here is my summary
The Legionary
One sunny day, Asterix and Obelix went to hunt some boars for lunch. Dazed Obelix hit the tree when he saw Panacea who was walking nobly. He made druid Getafix fell out from the tree while picking some mistletoe. Mysteriously, he acted like nothing happened to him and everything was alright. Then, dazed Obelix went to the kitchen with his four boars, ready to be cooked. Seemed that he has lost his appetite, because he only ate two boars. It was a little number of boars for someone as huge as Obelix. While Getafix and Asterix were talking about this problem, they saw Obelix walked insensibly, followed Panacea. Asterix tried to help Obelix with his love problem and gave some advices to attract woman. Mindlessly, Obelix intended to give the best menhir that he had. Asterix suggested him to give her a bunch of flowers from the forest with a romantic atmosphere. As he agreed, he went to the forest to pick some. But he suddenly stopped to try to get her since he knew that Panacea has been engaged and her husband has been recruited by Romans. Finally, with a displeasure feeling, they took the task to save Tragicomix, Panacea’s husband.
-johan-
Good afternoon Mr Teguh Santoso, here is my summary task...
By the way, have a nice teacher training ^^...
Summary:
Once upon a time in the little Gaulish Village, Asterix and Obelix were going to hunt boars, while a beautiful girl passed by. Obelix’s attention was changed to her immediately, so he crashed up against a big tree. The name of that beautiful girl was Panacea. In the eat time, Obelix didn’t eat his third boar, so Asterix worried about him. Asterix went to Getafix to ask about the potion as soon as possible. In the middle of the way, they saw Obelix followed Panacea from behind. Immediately, they considered that Obelix was in love. Asterix recommended Obelix to give Panacea a little present, a nice bunch of flowers. When Obelix was taking a bunch of flowers, he saw roman armies patrolled, and of course with his strength roman armies was flew away easily.
While they were talking to Panacea, they knew that Panacea was engaged to Tragicomix, and he was going to join the legion to Africa. Obelix felt so unhappy when he heard that. Although Obelix felt unhappy, he decided to help Panacea to try and get Tragicomix. Dogmatix, their lovely dogs, was taken care by Panacea as long as they helped Tragicomix.
No of words : 195 words
-jl-
Love at the first sight. That’s what Obelix, Asterix’s friend had been around suddenly in a great morning. Obelix get the love at first sight with Panacea, Soporiax’s daughter when he and Asterix were hunting for boars for eat. At first, Asterix didn’t know this until he found Druid Getafix, a famous Druid in Gaulish Village to found a solution. And finally, Asterix knew that his friend was falling in love. And for helping Obelix, Asterix gave Obelix advice to gave Panacea a present. And Obelix at last decided to gave Panacea a bunch of flowers that he got from the forest.
After Obelix got the flowers, he went to Panacea’s hut and gave her the flowers with Asterix beside him of course. No longer after Obelix gave the flowers, a postman came and gave Panacea a letter from Tragicomix who was Panacea’s boyfriend when she was at Condatum that told Tragicomix would never seen her again.
Because Panacea so sad when she knew this, Obelix decided to find Tragicomix for her. And together with Asterix, they went to Vitalstatistix, the village chief and after that, the druid gave asterix a magic potion, and together with Obelix, Asterix started their journey.
sir, this is the task.
One day asterix and obelix went to the forrsest to get some wild boars to hunt, in their way to the middle of the jungle, they bumped into a beautifull woman called panacea. Obelix fell in love with her and since that day forward he wanted to give evrything for the woman, when the just come back from their hunting, they saw her again walking across the gauliian street. Asterix cooked the boars, and it looked so delicious, but somehow obelix didn’t have any will to eat it, he just keep on taking a deep breath and smilling without any particular reason. Asterix knew that something’s wrong going on here, then he directly went to the druid called getafix and told him everything about it. Getafix got a little confused until he finally smiled widely and asked obelix and asterix to come with him. Gatefix called panacea and tell her that a man called obelix wanted to se her. Apart from his huge body, he couldn’t control his spirit and started to do something bizzare infront of all. Asterix realised that this isn’t right things to do and took obelix away. He told obelix that a gift would help thier relationship, and obelix thought that it was a good idea, firstly he brought a big rock with a silly ribbon tied upon it, but of course it wouldn’t make a thing even better.asterix asked him to go to the forrest to get a bunch of flower, he said that flower is a poetic present and a good start. Then obelix went to the forrest but intruders were hiding in the place where the blue flower grew. Obelix got rid of them and took some flower and headed back to the village. When he got there, asterix was waiting for him and took him to panacea’s house. He called panacea and told her that obelix had a present for her. She was very happy and knowing that obelix got a bunch of blue flower to gave her, they both finally started a good conversation.
-viciano-
Summary of ASTERIX AND OBELIX: THE LEGIONARY (page 4-13)
One day, in the Gaulish Village, Asterix and Obelix were going for a boar hunt. In the forest, they met Panacea, the daughter of Soporifix, and Obelix was in love with Panacea. After that meeting, he acted abnormally; he crashed trees, sighed many times, and ate only two boars. Asterix was confused and he was worried of Obelix. Therefore, he came to Getafix, the village druid. Getafix was shocked to know that Obelix ate only two boars. Then, Getafix decided to come and see Obelix. On the way to Obelix's house, they saw Obelix was following Panacea and they found out that Obelix was in love with her.
Obelix wanted to give her a present, so he went to the forest to get some flower. Soon, he came back with a bunch of flower and gave it to Panacea. Suddenly, Postaldistrix the Postman came and gave a message to Panacea from Tragicomix, her fiancé. Tragicomix told Panacea that he joined the Legion and was going to Africa. Panacea was very upset to know that she would probably never meet him again. Obelix was also very upset to know that Panacea was engaged. However, he wanted to go to Africa and promised her to bring back Tragicomix to her. After a quick preparation, Asterix and Obelix left the village and went to Africa.
By:
Noah Riandiputra
X BC - 15
sir, this is the task
On a quiet and sunny day, asterix and obelix went to the jungle to hunt some boar for lunch. But, Obelix started to act strange when they met Panacea in the jungle. Panacea is Soporifix’s daughter. She’s just came home after studying at condatum for two years. After Obelix saw her, he lost his concentration and hit a tree, making Getafix fell from it. Then, they came home to cook the boars they have caught. When they were eating the boars, Obelix didn’t eat all the boars, this made Asterix realized that there was something wrong with Obelix. So, he went to Getafix’s house and asked for it. First, Getafix and Asterix had no idea about it. But, after seeing how Obelix acted when he met Panacea, they knew that Obelix was falling in love with her. But, Hetafix didn’t have a magic potion for that, so he couldn’t help Obelix to get Panacea. So, Asterix Decided to help him. He asked Obelix to search a bunch of flower and gave it to Panacea. After getting a bunch of flower and beating several soldier of roman, He and Asterix went to panacea’s house. After they have talked a little bit, a Messenger come and bring a bad news, they said that tragicomix, Panacea’s fiancee went to join the romans army. This made Panacea cry, and hurt Obelix. But, Obelix decided to help her. After talking to Vitalstatistix, the chief of the tribe, brought some magic potions, and saying farewell to everyone, they went to search for Tragicomix.
Here is the picture
http://a1.vox.com/6a00c225227f77604a00d09e6844d9be2b-500pi
http://www.asterix.co.nz/take_a_look/legionary/tragicomix.jpg
http://www.asterix.co.nz/characters/panacea.jpg
Sir, sorry for being late, Because I thought that you told us to do this task on your hours on Tuesday, hehehe
The story began when Asterix and Obelix were planning to hunt boar in the forest. Suddenly they met a beautiful and Obelix was falling in love with her. He became weird, based on Asterix’s view. He often collided trees in the forest, he let go two Romans and boars, he even only ate two roasted boars (usually he ate three I think).
Asterix, who was worried with his friend’s condition, was asking for Getafix the druid’s help. When they were looking for the solution, accidentally the solution was showing itself in front of them. Then they knew that Obelix was falling in love with Panacea, a beautiful girl they met in the forest.
Getafix gave up because he didn’t have any magic potion for cure Obelix. Asterix was offering him to meet Panacea. But he was too shy, and he accidentally destroyed Cacofonix’s house. Finally, Obelix accepted Asterix’s offer. Then he quickly went to the forest to pick some flowers as present. Unfortunately, he met some Romans. Those unlucky Romans were punched to the sky because they were stomping the flowers.
After acquired something to give, he shyly went to Panacea’s house. When things were going to be better, suddenly Panacea received a bad news from her fiancé, Tragicomix. He was recruited by the Roman to become a soldier at Africa. The point was goodbye forever. Panacea was very sad, but Obelix was gently to take Tragicomix back. Asterix was proud of him, but actually Obelix’s heart was broken.
here are the pictures:
http://store.valueweb.com/karikter/catalog/0752866214L.jpg
http://mumblog.eu/wp-content/uploads/2008/02/b-27209-asterix.jpg
http://gb.asterix.com/missives/img57-1.gif
The story tells about Obelix’s love, he was walking through the forest with Asterix when he saw a very beautiful girl named Panacea. After that accidentally meeting, Obelix seemed so different, he even didn’t touch his delicious boars. Asterix and Druid Getafix felt very strange, and soon Druid know the reason of Obelix’s strange behavior. It is Panacea. So Asterix tried to help his friend, he tell Obelix to come to her house and give Panacea a little present. So Obelix ran to the forest to find some flowers, he also met some Romans and kick them. He took their helmet to be another present for Panacea, but Asterix said not to give it. And then, he went to her house with Asterix. Obelix gave the flowers and sit beside Panacea. He was very shy. Right after Asterix asked permission to leave, a message delivered to Panacea. It told her that, Tragicomix joined the Roman army and off to Africa. Tragicomix was the Panacea’s fiancée in Codantum. Obelix was very upset, but he encouraged himself and told Panacea that he will find Tragicomix. So Panacea was very happy. Asterix and Obelix soon got ready for the trip.
http://www.frithjof.de/asterix_asterix-obelix2.jpg
http://chirobranst.g-net.be/kamp2002/images/asterix-obelix.jpg
Hi, guys,
do NOT make similar mistakes (put in parentheses), RANDOMLY quoted, so you'll find the story strange. Good work! Comic is easy to understand, eh? Ho3x...
See the CORRECTION (in CAPITAL LETTERS) at the next posting after this.
ERRORS
Asterix and Obelix (was) a couple of very best friends. One day (asterix) and (obelix) went to the (forrsest) to get some wild boars to hunt(,) (in) their way to the middle of the jungle, they (bumped) into a (beautifull) woman called (panacea).
Obelix (get) the love at first sight with Panacea, Soporiax’s daughter ( ? ) when he and Asterix were hunting for boars (for eat).
Obelix (were act) strangely. He bumped into trees and just ate two boars (usually he ate three). Asterix (were) confused (to) Obelix’s strange acts.
In the (eat time), Obelix didn’t eat his third boar, so Asterix (?) worried about him. Asterix was so annoyed with his buddy’s changes (, he) knew something (has) gone wrong.
Asterix (?) very worried about Obelix and he asked Getafix to (saw) Obelix. On the way to Obelix's house, they saw Obelix (was) following Panacea and they found out that Obelix was in love with her.
So Asterix tried to help his friend(, he) (tell) Obelix to come to her house and (give) Panacea a little present.
As he agreed, he went to the forest to pick some. He often (collided) trees in the forest. Those unlucky Romans were punched to the sky because they were stomping (?) the flowers.
But he suddenly stopped (to try) to get her since he knew that Panacea (has) been engaged and her husband (has) been recruited by Romans.
When they came to Panacea’s home, a message (come) and (tell) that Panacea’s (husband) (is) going to Africa for some business.
He went to her place and suddenly, there(’s) a postman (came) and (bringing) (a) bad news to Panacea. Because Panacea (?) so sad when she knew this, Obelix decided to find Tragicomix for her.
The chief’s (explain) made Asterix (more steadily) to find and bring back Tragicomix. So (he together with Asterix) promised her to bring him back. Packed with foods, Getafix’s magic potions, and a broken heart, they were off to go.
The ERRORS are related to:
1. Tenses (be consistent with past tenses; FALSE: has been recruited BECAUSE "has" = present)
2. Agreement (was/were)
3. Use of vocabulary (NOT collided trees).
4. Spelling and punctuation (comma)
CORRECTIONof the previous comment on RANDOMLY quoted story.
Asterix and Obelix WERE a couple of very best friends. One day ASTERIX and OBELIX went to the FOREST to get some wild boars to hunt. (NOT a comma, please) ON their way to the middle of the jungle, they RAN into a BEAUTIFUL woman called PANACEA.
Obelix HAD the love at first sight with Panacea, Soporiax’s daughter, (use COMMA, please) when he and Asterix were hunting for boars TO EAT/ FOR EATING.
Obelix ACTED/ WAS ACTING strangely. He bumped into trees and just ate two boars (usually he ate three). Asterix WAS confused AT Obelix’s strange acts.
In the MEAL TIME, Obelix didn’t eat his third boar, so Asterix WAS worried about him. Asterix was so annoyed with his buddy’s changes. (use a FULL STOP, please) HE knew something HAD gone wrong.
Asterix WAS very worried about Obelix and he asked Getafix to SEE Obelix. On the way to Obelix's house, they saw Obelix (DELETE: was) following Panacea and they found out that Obelix was in love with her.
So Asterix tried to help his friend. (no use of COMMA, please) He TOLD Obelix to come to her house and GIVE/ TO GIVE Panacea a little present.
As he agreed, he went to the forest to pick some. He often BUMPED INTO trees in the forest. Those unlucky Romans were punched to the sky because they were stomping ON the flowers.
But he suddenly stopped TRYING to get her since he knew that Panacea HAD been engaged and her husband HAD been recruited by Romans.
When they came to Panacea’s home, a message CAME and TOLD THEM that Panacea’s FIANCE WAS going to Africa for some business.
He went to her place and suddenly, there WAS a postman WHO CAME and BROUGHT (DELETE: "a") bad news to Panacea. Because Panacea WAS so sad when she knew this, Obelix decided to find Tragicomix for her.
The chief’s EXPLANATION made Asterix STEADIER/ MORE CONVINCED to find and bring back Tragicomix. So TOGETHER WITH ASTERIX, OBELIX promised her to bring him back. Packed with foods, Getafix’s magic potions, and a broken heart, they were off to go.
GREAT summary/expression!1. Those unlucky Romans were punched to the sky because they were stomping ON the flowers.
2. .. he knew that Panacea HAD been engaged and her husband HAD been recruited by Romans.
SIR: It's OK. "Past perfect tense" has not been taught before.
3. Packed with foods, Getafix’s magic potions, and a broken heart, they were off to go.
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