Hi, guys, put your today's work on a persuasive letter to the President of the IOC, stating your reasons why you must be the one to go to London for the 2012 Olympic Games. Also include:
1. some ideas from passage A on page 1 (Workbook)
2. your own ideas.
Write around 150 words and post your writing in the COMMENT box.
Don't forget, guys, to write your name.
Deadline: Tuesday, April 7th, 2009
Tuesday, April 07, 2009
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From: Samuel
To: The President of the IOC
Dear President of IOE,
I am Samuel, wishing to get the free ticket to the next Olympic freely. There must be many reasons why would like to get the ticket freely. First, I am a student who loves sports very much, I admire the art of sports very much, and instead, the Olympic Games will have a big value of art inside. There are many athletes who have much talent.
Second, because I am a man who loves doing sports, not just watching it. I can play many sports, even it’s not good enough for the international level. And I can make relationship with sport. So, when I get to the Olympic, I can communicate with other person and make good connection with another person.
Regards.
Samuel
this must be in the beginner level....
T-T
Dear President of the IOC,
I am writing to you on purpose to tell you about why I am deserved to get the free trip to the next Olympics which is held in London.
I am Natasia Yosua Yahya, an ordinary student who has a great interest in sports and games. I have watched two previous Olympic Games: Beijing 2008 Olympic Games and Athens 2004 Olympic Games, and I was always wondering whether I can watch the games live.
I love the way athletes do their best to get medals personally and the way they work together to make a great achievement as a team.
That’s why, I really wish that I could get the opportunity to come there by receiving the free ticket from IOC.
You could contact me at thaa_desrain@hotmail.com. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Faithfully Yours,
Natasia Yosua Yahya.
SMAK PENABUR GADING SERPONG
Jl. Kelapa Gading Barat Raya
Tangerang, Indonesia
Tuesday, April, 7 2009
International Olympic Committee
Lausanne
Switzerland
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to obtain a free trip to the London 2012 Olympic game.
I am Alvin Vimala, a high school student in Indonesia. I would like to obtain a free trip for the next olympic games which are going to be hold in London year 2012. I am trying to get this free because I love to do sports. Sports are really fun and they could bring up a joy in my life. Besides, I also want to watch a sport match live. I guess that this would be a great opportunity for me. I also would like to meet some athletes taking part in the Olympic Games 2012 hold in London. I want to see in front of my own eyes how they achieve a medal and how proud are they when they could achieve a gold medal. It had been a dream for me since I was small.
Finally, I would like to thank you for the attention. I am looking forward to hearing from you. You can cont me at vimala0421@hotmail.com
Faithfully yours,
Alvin Vimala
SMAK Penabur Gading Serpong
Kelapa Gading Barat Raya, Gading Serpong
Tangerang, Indonesia
15425
Tuesday, April 7, 2009
President of IOC
Lausanne, Switzerland
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing a letter to you in order to get a free trip plus accommodation to the next Olympic Games in London.
I've watched the previous Olympic Games in Beijing on TV and I was shocked by the lavish of the Olympic Games, it’s amazing. I wish I could watch the next Olympic Games in London directly. It would be an unforgettable experience if I could see, watch, even talk with the athletes from various countries. I would be ready to sit for hours just to watch their struggle, their fair match, and the smile and happiness in their faces when they know they are the champion and about the medals that they received.
That’s all from my letter. Thank you for reading my letter.
Best regard,
Felik Junvianto - X BC - 4
SMAK Penabur Gading Serpong
Jl. Kelapa Gading Barat Raya
Tangerang, Indonesia
15325
April 7th, 2009
President of IOC
9th railroad
London, 39284
Dear Mr. Rogge,
My name is Laurensia Marcelina Anggraini. I am a 15 years Indonesian student. I am writing to you because I want to get free ticket and free accommodation for 2012 Olympics game.
My best friend is a participants of 2012 Olympics game. I want to see her struggle lively and gift support to her. I am sure that she will be more spirited with my support and her chance to get the medal is bigger. The problem is I do not have so much money to go to London. The ticket to go to London is so expensive and of course it will be more expensive during the Olympics game time. I do not sure that my money will be enough to buy the ticket even though I start to save my money now.
I am begging on you to grant my request. Thank you for your time to read my letter.
Faithfully yours,
Laurensia Marcelina Anggraini
Sir, This is my assignment.. ^^
I'm sorry if there are a lot of mistakes.. (especially for my email adress which the correct one must be "hatelovesbc@yahoo.com" hehe.
Btw, thank you Sir.. ^^
GBU always
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Jalan Kelapa Puan XVI / AG 13 no.1
Gading Serpong
Tanggerang, Banten
Indonesia
President of IOC
Dear Mr.Jacques Rogge,
I am writing this letter in purpose to get a free ticket to the Olympic Games 2012 in London, UK.
Actually I am a high school student of SMAK BPK PENABUR Gading Serpong, Banten, Indonesia.
I got an assignment from my English teacher to make a report about the beauty and the wonderful of Olympic Games 2012 later. He wanted to publish my project in the international newspaper. In the day when Olympic Games will be held, I will interview some players from each country and the IOC members. And I wish to see a great Olympic Truce in England. The other reason I want to see the Olympic Games is I want to see the great innovation from England after years the Olympic Games first was held. I think it will be great can see the great innovation from England after Chinese (Beijing) last year.
I would like to thank you and I am waiting for your answer by my phone (081511891229) or by my email (hatelovebc@yahoo.com)
Sincerely Yours,
Hans Tannady
-hatelovebc.blogspot.com-
Tuesday, April 7, 2009
President of IOC
9th railroad
London,39284
Dear Sir or Madam,
First of all, I want to introduce myself. I am Ilona Christy, a 15 years old Indonesian student. I am still a high school student in a badminton school. I am very interested in sport, especially badminton, because this sport is well developed in my country. Many badminton athlete is trained here, and they are very expert in this sport. Some of them take some marvelous rank in Badminton International Ranking, Like Taufik Hidayat who take the 7th rank. It makes me want to develop this badminton in my beloved country, Indonesia. That’s why I want to ask you to give me this free trip. Because I really want to support my country in the next Olympic Games and I also want to make a little research about how to develop this sport in my country by seeing the match directly, like how to keep your stamina during the match. Some of my seniors also join the next Olympic Games. I will be very excited if I can support them. I hope you want to help me to do this mission. It is really important for me and my country. Thank you for your attention.
Faithfully yours,
Ilona Christy
SMAK Penabur Gading Serpong
Kelapa Gading Barat Raya, Gading Serpong
Tangerang, Indonesia
15425
April 7th, 2009
International Olympic Committee
Lausanne
Switzerland
Dear Sir/Madam,
Firstly, I want to introduce myself. I am an ordinary student that goes to SMAK BPK Penabur Gading Serpong. I join Brilliant Class program.
After knowing that there will be a free trip to London 2012 for Olympic game, I'm really interested in joining the trip.
There are at least two reasons why I'm really interested.
First of all, I have already watched the previous Olympic Games in Beijing. I am really stunned because of the beauty of it. Amazing! I wonder when I can watch directly such a great event like that again.
I'm sure that this is a rare opportunity and really precious to be missed.
So I wish I could watch the next Olympic Games in London.
Next, I love the way people struggle to be a winner and bring credit to their country. Also, I want to give support for my lovely country.
For addition, I can feel the happiness of who wins the Olympic Games.
It's really enjoying!
Finally, I want to thank you for all of your attention.
Faithfully yours,
Joses Grady Nathanael X-BC 09
SMAK PENABUR GADING SERPONG
Jl. Kelapa Gading Barat Raya
Tangerang, Indonesia
Tuesday, April, 7 2009
International Olympic Committee
Lausanne
Switzerland
Dear Mr.Jacques Rogge,
I am writing this letter to obtain a free trip to the London 2012 Olympic game.
I would like to introduce myself. My name is James Liman. I am a senior high student SMAK BPK Penabur Gading Serpong, Indonesia and also student of Manchester United-Indonesia Soccer Academy. I have plenty of awards and I would represent Indonesia in the London 2012 Olympic Game. Unfortunately I don’t have any money to go to London and participate, so I hope you would like to give me a free trip to London as soon as possible. I guarantee you that I will take gold medal and I will share your kindness to everybody in the world.
I am waiting for your answer and you can contact me via email (james_liman@hotmail.com)
Sincerely yours,
James Liman
SMAK PENABUR Gading Serpong
Jl. Kelapa Gading Barat, Gading Serpong
Tangerang, Banten
Indonesia
15425
April 7, 2009
International Olympic Committee
Lausanne, Switzerland
Dear Sir/Madame,
I am writing this letter in order to obtain a free trip to the London 2012 Olympic Games.
My name is Noah Riandiputra. I am 15 years old student of Brilliant Class SMAK PENABUR Gading Serpong. One of my favourite parts in the Olympic Games is the Opening Ceremony. I have been writing a book about the opening ceremonies of several Olympic Games and the connection with their local customs. It will be published in 2013, and the London 2012 Olympic Games will be the last chance for me to feel the spirit of Olympic Games directly there before that book is published. It will be a great experience for me if I could watch the whole Olympic Games there. Since I was 5 years old, I have been dreaming to watch directly the Olympic Games. I also would like to support my country, Indonesia, in the London 2012 Olympic Games.
Finally, I would like to express my gratitude for your attention. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Faithfully Yours,
Noah Riandiputra
noah-riandiputra.blogspot.com
Dear Madam/ Sir
I am writing this letter to you to ask a free ticket to the 2012 Olympics in London. I am very interested to see the next Olympic which held in London.
I am just a high school student in SMAK Penabur Gading Serpong. I very love sports. I don’t just like to see people doing sports but I also love to doing sports.
I wondering that I can see the games live because I would like to meet the athletes and have some communication with them. Not only to see the athletes, I am also would like to see the Olympic truce lively.
I am very expecting the free ticket because there would to be expensive if I go to London myself.
Finally, I would like to express my gratitude to you. I am looking forward to hearing from you. You can contact me at fransiskalilie@yahoo.com.
Faithfully yours,
Lilie Fransiska
Sir, this is my assignment
it's has 183 words or so-so
another thing, can sir tell me what another task should I do relating to the blog
thank you
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The President of International Olympic Committee
Lausanne
Switzerland
Dear Mr. Jacques Rogge
Let me introduce myself, I’m Evan from Indonesia. I’ve heard that I can have free trip for the next Olympic In London at 2012 and I’m very interested getting the chance that might be once in my lifetime.
Of course many of them also wanted to get this chance, but I can assure you that I have the right to get the free trip. First, this will be the very first time I’m to go to Olympic, and because this is free trip, it is very unique. Not only see the Olympic live, but I can see what the athletes do when they not compete. Second, because the Olympic will be held all across England, I can see what is England really are, the people, it’s culture, and many wonderful view. Everyplace in England must be unique, even the stadium, especially the cross-country sport. I hope you can give me the chance because it could be my one and only chance to go to Olympic games in another country.
Regards
Evan
Thanks, EVAN! Wow!
OK, everybody. It's already 10.45p.m. I'd better go to bed.
Time for liver cleansing for us: 11p.m.-1a.m. Remember the National Univ. of Taiwan finding, eh? Good night!
SIR
Imagine that you can win a free trip to the next Olympics by writing a letter to the President of the IOC. You must explain persuasively why you wish to attend. (London, 2012)
SMAK Penabur Gading Serpong
Jl. Kelapa Gading Barat Raya
Tangerang, Indonesia
15325
Tuesday, April 7th, 2009
International Olympic Committee
Lausanne
Switzerland
Dear President of International Olympics Committee,
I am writing this letter to you on purpose to explain the reasons to attend the next International Olympics Games in London, 2012.
I am Leonard Andreas, a student of Brilliant Class, a class where main focuses of the students are science. I am now in 10th grade and I am really interested to attend the next International Olympics Games. The main reason for me to attend the next International Olympic Games is because of my deep affection to sports. My other reason is to see the procedure of the International Olympic Games, from the very beginning, until the end.
In the end, I would like to express my gratitude to you. You could contact me at delta_leonz@yahoo.co.id. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely Yours,
Leonard Andreas
Jakarta,6 april 2009
SMAK Penabur Gading Serpong,
Kelapa gading barat raya
President of IOC
Dear,sir
I’ve heard about this information and i’m quite interested in joining the trip.as everybody know that the beijing olympic will be held soon in beijing and of course it will be one of the biggest olympic games.
I attend to join this free trip because i think from this trip i could get a valueable experience, many friends, and of course it’s because i like sport so much. I love warching every sport in tv and i wish i could watch the real olympic.in order to prepare myself, if you thyink that i’m the rightr person, please send me the the schedule of the trip, and anything that would be important to me.
Thank you for your attention, i look forward to hearing from you, please send to leeviciano@yahoo.com
Sincerely yours,
viciano
SMAK PENABUR Gading Serpong
Jl. Kelapa Gading Barat Raya
Tangerang, Indonesia
15325
April 7th, 2009
International Olympic Committee (IOE)
Switzerland
Dear the president of IOE,
I’m writing this letter to you on purpose to receive the free trip ticket to Olympic game on London 2012.
My name is Billy Sugiarto (15), a student in PENABUR. I wrote this letter so I could get the free ticket to watch the Olympic game 2012.
The first reason why I want to watch the Olympic game 2012 is that I really like to do sports such as basketball, football, tennis, swim, etc. I love to do those things because I can enjoy doing it. Otherwise sports make me healthy.
And the second reason is that when I can go there, I may see many athletes and that’s mean I can ask them how to do that kind of sport as well as them. And also I can learn from them how to train, how to be a athlete like them, etc.
That’s all from me. I want to thanks for your attention and for taking your time to read this letter. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. You can contact me at billz_gatez1@yahoo.com.
Faithfully yours,
Billy Sugiarto
SMAK Penabur Gading Serpong
Kelapa Gading Barat Raya, Gading Serpong
Tangerang, Indonesia
15425
Tuesday, April 7, 2009
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you because i really want to watch the olympic games.
But, i don't have enough money. But, because i really like sports and i want to watch the biggest sport game in the world, i must watch the olympic games. I want to see the best player from the other country. And i want to have an experience to watch olympic games.
So, i was hoping that i could win a free trip to the next olympic games.
Yours Faithfully,
Kevin Adrian
Dear The President of IOC
SMAK Penabur Gading Serpong
Jl. Kelapa Gading Barat Raya
Tangerang, Indonesia
15325
I am Johan Chrisnata and I am writing to you in purpose to tell you about why I am deserved to get the free trip to the next Olympic. Thank you for your time to read my letter. I am very thank God for having a chance to see the the Olympic. Well, My reason to see it by my own eyes, is becauese I like the games very much and it will be the first time for me to watch the international tournament of sports. I think it was a perfect time to go abroad too. The other reason is because it is my favourite to watch a game sport, and I will give some supports to Indonesian team so they can struggle and do their best . You can contact me at Johan_Chrisnata@yahoo.co.id . I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Faithfully yours,
Johan Chrisnata
The Jonatan Residence
Jl. Kelapa Sawit XI no 21, Gading Serpong
Tangerang, Banten
Indonesia
April 8, 2009
International Olympic Committee
Lausanne, Switzerland
Dear Sir or Madam,
By writing this letter to you, I, Patricia Jonatan from Indonesia, would like to get the free trip to London 2012 Olympic Games you offered on www.feelfreetoinsertanyname.com.
I am a big fan of the Olympic Games that I have watched them since I was six. Every single event was neatly organized and pleasant to watch. My family and I were very excited, though we saw them only on TV.
But that's not the only reason for me writing this letter. Though I am still in my first year of high school, I am actually an expert event organizer, specialized in sport games. By watching the whole event of Olympic Games directly, I can got the precious experience that may develop my skill, so I am closer to my dream, to be an IOC member, taking part in the making of that prestigious event.
I am very serious about this, and I am looking forward to get your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Patricia Jonatan
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